托福写作关键错误类型解析
在托福写作评分标准中，语言准确性占重要比重。根据ETS官方数据统计，约63%的考生在句式结构方面存在明显问题。以下针对三大典型错误进行详细说明：
| 错误类型 | 典型特征 | 修正方案 |
|---|---|---|
| 破碎句 | 缺少谓语或从句结构不完整 | 补充核心动词，使用定语从句重构 |
| 接连句 | 两独立句无连接词直接相连 | 添加however/therefore等逻辑连接词 |
| 连接错误 | 仅用逗号连接独立分句 | 改用分号或添加并列连词 |
实战案例深度解析
错误示例：
Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers who have greater freedom to plan their time.
优化方案：
方案一
Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However, they have more freedom to plan their own time.
方案二
Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however, they have more freedom to plan their time.
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